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02 October 2009 @ 04:59 am
Tsuru - Roman CD  
Artist: Tsuru
Album name: Roman CD
Tracks :
  1. MP3LogoThank You Baby
  2. MP3LogoHonne No Honne
  3. MP3LogoDainamaitsu Kanchigai
  4. MP3LogoTsuru-San
  5. MP3LogoMahou No Uta
  6. MP3LogoBeriorai
  7. MP3LogoKadode
  8. MP3LogoMachibouke
  9. MP3LogoYuki Machi
  10. MP3LogoMawaru Yo Sekai



Can I please please have someone edit my Japanese writiting? Thanks much!?

It says:
kore wa usagi desu. shiroi iro wo shite ite, nagai mimi to ookina ha wo motte imasu. ame ga fureba, ki no shita ni kakuremasu.

korera wa kame desu. midori iro de, koura wo motte ite, chiisai desu. tenki ga yokereba, hinatabokko wo shimasu.

korera wa pengin desu. ookina kuchibashi wo shite ite, shirokuro de, yawarakai umou wo motte imasu. atsui toki niwa oyogimasu.

korera wa kirin desu. se ga takaku, kirei na ke wo motte ite, hizume ga arimasu. ame ga fureba, nukumoru tame ni muragarimasu.

saigo ni, korera wa tsuru desu. nagai ashi wo motte ite, sakana wo toru tame no nagai kuchibashi wo motte imasu. tsuru wa kireina tori desu. ame ga hageshiku fureba, sakana wo toru koto ga dekimasen.

It is meant to have 3 physical traits about each: rabbit, turtle, penguin, giraffe, crane. Also what each would do in different weather. Can you correct in romaji any mistakes or things that sound odd? But please try to keep it simple! I need to memorize it. Thanks again! :)